11.7 Whispers
I want to expand on my earlier post,Things I told My Therapist; maybe eventually breaking it down to a series of short poems.I shoulder mirages, drink in their water.One says, screw you, dances left....
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I like this. i think you could play with the line breaks some....but it is a good idea for a series...
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Posted this one too early, I keep coming back to edit. I think I'll leave it for now though; see what I think in a few more days.
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I shoulder mirages, drink in their water. like one of those squirmy plastic inflatable water-carriers. Nice!
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Uh-oh! Hearing voices is probably creepier than seeing things. Wheeeee to another 7!!!
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